Opening Sequence 3rd Draft

WWW: (what went well)



• Good match on action when she is going inside the house
• The music and the sound effects on the flashbacks work realy well with each scene.
• Follow the rule of flashback > Reality & focus in her face before and after a flashback, so the audience doesn`t get confused.

EBI: (even better if)

• Shots are to long
• Add more flashbacks at the shower scene

Teacher Assesement:

• With more flashback the pace will get faster and it will show she is frustrated.

Target:

• Film different flashbacks
• Improve continuity