Opening Sequence 2nd Draft

Teacher Assesement:

Overall level: 2

Overall Mark: 32/33

WWW: Good range of shots

              Slow motion on the flashbacks

              Story is clearer

              Good Location

              Panning shot (leaning against shower)

EBI:  Some scenes could be shorter

         Angry when thronging boots she should be sad

         Change musicon the flashbacks

         Flashbacks dont relate

         Scene in the bathroomis to long

         Noises Alexa makes are too whiney      

Target: Imoprove match on action

             Always focus on her face before going to a flash back

             Try mo make scenes shorter