Today i sat with Miss Connell to discuss about the mistakes we were having on our second draft. She said they were very simple to fix and she advised us with some help:
Add more Flashbacks
Make the shots as shorter as possible
Establish the character( maybe with a voice over at the beggining)
Have more match on action when she is going into the house and when she is going up the stairs.
I found her help very useful because it always guides us to the right direction, and we are always focusing on making things better.
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