Opening Sequence 1st Draft

Teacher Assessment Improvements:

WWW:

• Good layout of tittles, considered genre
• Very good her facing away when he is touching her
• A variety of shots, considered match on action

EBI:

• The music is so wrong
• Too long
• It should be Flashback, reality, flashback, reality......
• Establish the character first (coming up the stairs)
• Camera: shaky and inconsistent. The zoom was done very badly.
• Voiceover was so whiney, cant really hear it and too repetitive

Target:

• Establish the character at the beginning
• Research a music that follows the genre
• Improve the camera shots, and zoom.

Assessment:

Group level:  1/2    Group mark:

Individual effort/contribution:   4    Individual Mark: 23 out of 24